archint
Archint Designs is Looking for those Females Candidates who are smart in handling Front Desk and are professionally qualified into Graphic Designing.
Intrested Candidate can forward their Updated Resume with one Passport size photograph on or call on +91-995-868-8687.

From India, Delhi
Dinesh Divekar
7884

Hello,
Would you mind to learn basics of business writing? How can you write "girls" in your ad?
Your first sentence should have read "Archint Designs is Looking for women candidates who are smart in handling Front Desk and are professionally qualified into Graphic Designing"
Thank god you are in India and not in some western country lest you would have ended up in getting sued for gender bias.
Dinesh V Divekar

From India, Bangalore
Cite Contribution
1859

Greetings,

I agree with Divekar, when you are hiring for your organization, you would require people not just work for it but to respect it. It would get very difficult, when your sentence formation is incorrect. The message you wish you communicate would completely go wrong. It would portray a very disturbing picture about you.

Hope you would consider our suggestions.

Regards,
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From India, Mumbai
Dinesh Divekar
7884

Hello,
I had suggested you to write "women candidates". But you have written "female". Even this is also not professional.
Male and female are biological differences. These differences have no place in corporate set up. In India word "female' is widely used but it is completely wrong as far as international standards concerned.
Anyway ignorance is bliss and let us put up with it!
DVD

From India, Bangalore
archint
I think you don’t have any other work to do except ponting mistakes on other Threads.
From India, Delhi
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