Dear Members, I need to organize badminton match for employees. Can anyone suggest me mail format to be sent to employees for sending information related to this game? Regards Shallu
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Hello,
Please don't think I am rude. Can't you write simple sentences in English? Is it too difficult to try out something yourself, like a recipe for a new dish? A disastrous recipe may even cause bodily harm if cooked and eaten. However, if you attempt to write in English yourself, nothing will happen. Never feel shy or hesitate because you may make a mistake or something. Unless you attempt, when will you start learning?
Even for writing a leave letter or a resignation letter, youngsters immediately rush to CiteHR. It is really a worrying trend. Why don't you please try it out yourself and post it here so that we can at least correct it?
How long do you think you can go on asking for others' help? Unless you attempt it yourself, make mistakes, learn from them, one can never improve in life. Success is 10% inspiration and 90% perspiration.
Please make an attempt yourself and come back to us. It will only take me two minutes to assist you. Remember the saying: "Instead of giving a fish to the needy every day, teach the person how to fish!" That is what I am doing here.
Best wishes
From India, Bengaluru
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Please don't think I am rude. Can't you write simple sentences in English? Is it too difficult to try out something yourself, like a recipe for a new dish? A disastrous recipe may even cause bodily harm if cooked and eaten. However, if you attempt to write in English yourself, nothing will happen. Never feel shy or hesitate because you may make a mistake or something. Unless you attempt, when will you start learning?
Even for writing a leave letter or a resignation letter, youngsters immediately rush to CiteHR. It is really a worrying trend. Why don't you please try it out yourself and post it here so that we can at least correct it?
How long do you think you can go on asking for others' help? Unless you attempt it yourself, make mistakes, learn from them, one can never improve in life. Success is 10% inspiration and 90% perspiration.
Please make an attempt yourself and come back to us. It will only take me two minutes to assist you. Remember the saying: "Instead of giving a fish to the needy every day, teach the person how to fish!" That is what I am doing here.
Best wishes
From India, Bengaluru
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Dear Mr. Sundaram,
Thank you for inspiring me for writing mail draft for sending information to employees.
Earlier I made one mail draft but asked for ideas for choosing the best format.
Pl find below details and suggest changes.I have also selected images which i will be incorporating in the mail.
I have also mailed you this draft on your gmail id.
Dear ALL,
Badminton match is being orgnanised as part of employee engagement for encouraging healthy relationships, and promoting fitness and fun through friendly competition.
Match start date : 22.Oct ….
Timings : During Lunch hours - (1:45-2:15)pm
Tournament structure information will be sent shortly.
Note : Participation is compulsory
From India, Haryana
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Thank you for inspiring me for writing mail draft for sending information to employees.
Earlier I made one mail draft but asked for ideas for choosing the best format.
Pl find below details and suggest changes.I have also selected images which i will be incorporating in the mail.
I have also mailed you this draft on your gmail id.
Dear ALL,
Badminton match is being orgnanised as part of employee engagement for encouraging healthy relationships, and promoting fitness and fun through friendly competition.
Match start date : 22.Oct ….
Timings : During Lunch hours - (1:45-2:15)pm
Tournament structure information will be sent shortly.
Note : Participation is compulsory
From India, Haryana
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Hi,
First of all, I support Mr. Sundram's point of view that one must make an attempt first and then seek help. I must congratulate Shallu on taking the feedback positively and for making that attempt in drafting the circular.
While the draft is a good attempt, I would suggest that while drafting, the focus must be on answering the following questions:
- What is the subject matter of the email?
- Why is the email to be sent?
- Who is the email to be addressed to?
- What must the content of the email include?
- What action is needed to be taken by those reading the email?
- Is there any additional information or input to be enclosed?
In fact, in the above draft you have prepared, the tournament structure is a critical element and should form an integral part of your communication.
I am sure Mr. Sundram must have sent you a corrected draft. If not, I would suggest you attempt another draft using the pointers given above.
Best wishes
From India, Mumbai
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First of all, I support Mr. Sundram's point of view that one must make an attempt first and then seek help. I must congratulate Shallu on taking the feedback positively and for making that attempt in drafting the circular.
While the draft is a good attempt, I would suggest that while drafting, the focus must be on answering the following questions:
- What is the subject matter of the email?
- Why is the email to be sent?
- Who is the email to be addressed to?
- What must the content of the email include?
- What action is needed to be taken by those reading the email?
- Is there any additional information or input to be enclosed?
In fact, in the above draft you have prepared, the tournament structure is a critical element and should form an integral part of your communication.
I am sure Mr. Sundram must have sent you a corrected draft. If not, I would suggest you attempt another draft using the pointers given above.
Best wishes
From India, Mumbai
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Dear Mr. Jacob, Thank you for the response. Mr. Sundaram has already mailed me the draft. I will always keep in mind the points which you have suggested me for writing mails. Regards, Shallu
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Hi all, 🤖
We will be celebrating Friendship Day on Saturday, the 4th of August 2018. 🤗🤙🤝🤤
The Friendship Day Dress Code will be wearing a colored attire from the below-mentioned list. Each color holds a different meaning. Read to know:
- Red is the color of fire and blood, so it is associated with energy, strength, power, determination, as well as passion, desire, and love.
- Yellow is the color of sunshine. It's associated with joy, happiness, intellect, and energy.
- Green is the color of nature. It symbolizes growth, harmony, freshness. Green has a strong emotional correspondence with safety.
- Blue is the color of the sky and the sea. It is often associated with depth and stability. It symbolizes trust, loyalty, wisdom, confidence, intelligence, faith, truth, and heaven.
- White is associated with light, goodness, innocence, and purity. It is considered to be the color of perfection.
- Pink is a delicate color that means sweet, nice, playful, cute, romantic, and charming.
So, what's the color you stand for? 🦅🦇🦈🦎
That's not all! The following colored Friendship ribbons will be distributed to all:
- Green - Evergreen friend
- Red - Energetic friend
- Blue - Motivational friend
- Pink - Faithful friend
- Yellow - Understanding friend
Tie these ribbons to your evergreen, energetic, motivational, faithful, or understanding colleagues and spread the joy of Friendship! 🎉
The one with the maximum number of Friendship ribbons will be awarded the 'Mr. Vista Buddy or Miss. Vista Buddy 2018' 🎉🏅
We have also arranged a 'How to Invest & Save Money' talk at 5:30 p.m. 💰💸
Hoping to see active participation by one and all on this friend-filled and fun-filled Saturday! 🎁
During this month, the following activities are lined up:
AUGUST 18 MONTH PLAN
| SR NO | DATE | DAY | PLANS | TIMING |
|-------|----------|----------|------------------------------------------|---------|
| 1 | 4.08.18 | Saturday | Friendship Day celebration | 5:30 to 6:30 |
| 2 | 10.08.18 | Friday | Carrom Tournament - Doubles | 5:30 to 6:30 |
| 3 | 15.08.18 | Wednesday| Independence Day - Holiday | |
| 4 | 21.08.18 | Tuesday | Basic Etiquette at work - How to draft an e-mail | 4:30 to 5:15 |
| 5 | 22.08.18 | Wednesday| Bakri Eid - Holiday | |
| 6 | 25.08.18 | Saturday | Carrom Tournament - Doubles | 5:30 to 6:30 |
| 7 | 31.08.18 | Friday | Carrom Tournament - Doubles | 5:30 to 6:30 |
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I have corrected the spelling, grammar, and formatting errors in the text while maintaining the original meaning and tone. Let me know if you need any further assistance.
From India, Mumbai
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Hi all, 🤖
We will be celebrating Friendship Day on Saturday, the 4th of August 2018. 🤗🤙🤝🤤
The Friendship Day Dress Code will be wearing a colored attire from the below-mentioned list. Each color holds a different meaning. Read to know:
- Red is the color of fire and blood, so it is associated with energy, strength, power, determination, as well as passion, desire, and love.
- Yellow is the color of sunshine. It's associated with joy, happiness, intellect, and energy.
- Green is the color of nature. It symbolizes growth, harmony, freshness. Green has a strong emotional correspondence with safety.
- Blue is the color of the sky and the sea. It is often associated with depth and stability. It symbolizes trust, loyalty, wisdom, confidence, intelligence, faith, truth, and heaven.
- White is associated with light, goodness, innocence, and purity. It is considered to be the color of perfection.
- Pink is a delicate color that means sweet, nice, playful, cute, romantic, and charming.
So, what's the color you stand for? 🦅🦇🦈🦎
That's not all! The following colored Friendship ribbons will be distributed to all:
- Green - Evergreen friend
- Red - Energetic friend
- Blue - Motivational friend
- Pink - Faithful friend
- Yellow - Understanding friend
Tie these ribbons to your evergreen, energetic, motivational, faithful, or understanding colleagues and spread the joy of Friendship! 🎉
The one with the maximum number of Friendship ribbons will be awarded the 'Mr. Vista Buddy or Miss. Vista Buddy 2018' 🎉🏅
We have also arranged a 'How to Invest & Save Money' talk at 5:30 p.m. 💰💸
Hoping to see active participation by one and all on this friend-filled and fun-filled Saturday! 🎁
During this month, the following activities are lined up:
AUGUST 18 MONTH PLAN
| SR NO | DATE | DAY | PLANS | TIMING |
|-------|----------|----------|------------------------------------------|---------|
| 1 | 4.08.18 | Saturday | Friendship Day celebration | 5:30 to 6:30 |
| 2 | 10.08.18 | Friday | Carrom Tournament - Doubles | 5:30 to 6:30 |
| 3 | 15.08.18 | Wednesday| Independence Day - Holiday | |
| 4 | 21.08.18 | Tuesday | Basic Etiquette at work - How to draft an e-mail | 4:30 to 5:15 |
| 5 | 22.08.18 | Wednesday| Bakri Eid - Holiday | |
| 6 | 25.08.18 | Saturday | Carrom Tournament - Doubles | 5:30 to 6:30 |
| 7 | 31.08.18 | Friday | Carrom Tournament - Doubles | 5:30 to 6:30 |
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I have corrected the spelling, grammar, and formatting errors in the text while maintaining the original meaning and tone. Let me know if you need any further assistance.
From India, Mumbai
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