Hi Everyone,
I have been asked to send a circular to employees announcing the ayudha pooja celebration, please find the below draft, please let me know if i have give some touch ups.......or any changes in the words. Kindly guide.
Dear All,
Wishing you a very Happy Ayudha Pooja in advance! We will be having the ayudha pooja celebration tomorrow at 5:00pm.
Looking forward to your presence in this joyous occasion!!!
From India, Madras
6I have been asked to send a circular to employees announcing the ayudha pooja celebration, please find the below draft, please let me know if i have give some touch ups.......or any changes in the words. Kindly guide.
Dear All,
Wishing you a very Happy Ayudha Pooja in advance! We will be having the ayudha pooja celebration tomorrow at 5:00pm.
Looking forward to your presence in this joyous occasion!!!
From India, Madras
It is fine.... go ahead. It is brief and crisp. Only mention "We will be..." as a separate sentence.
From India, Pune
From India, Pune
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