savan123
application of these methods in stores in San Diago nd Cinncinati have resulted in 30 drop in robberies an a 50 percent decling in violence there, according at the developers if the security, Hanover brothers, Inc.
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Application of these methods in stores in San Diago and Cinncinati, have resulted in 30% drop in robberies and a 50% decline in violence there, according to the developers of the security system, Hanover Brothers Inc.
Jacob
Personality Development, Communication Skills and Written Communication
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Applying these methods in San Diego and Cincinnati stores has resulted in a 30% drop in robberies and a 50% decline in violence, according to the security developers, Hanover Brothers, Inc.
Avoid wordiness by cutting out every redundant word, prefer verbs to nouns, particularly nouns ending with ...tion and ...ment (eg 'application' in your sentence; prefer 'we were in agreement' to 'we agreed'; 'we had a discussion' to 'we discussed', 'she submitted an application' to 'she applied' etc.); make active voice the voice of your choice except when passive is required for tone and rapport; and edit edit and edit.
Rani Innes
Senior communications skills consultant
Link Communications

From India, Bangalore
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